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    Inactive Member Aurain's Avatar
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    <h1>Under a Tree</h1>
    I am sitting here, watching the world go.
    Under a shady tree, a sweet breeze blows.
    Passing people are moving to and fro.
    Meanwhile, the crackle of a chicken crows.

    A peaceful sight is presented to me.
    Sweet smells of morning, a feast for my nose!
    Can the day naught end? Do I need a key?
    Is there a lock which seals a door? Oh woe!

    Perchance, this could not happen or can it?
    My'n eyes hide themselves, from the thoughts enclosed.
    Withholding memoir's are degenerate!
    People change scenes, which are twice imposed.

    I cannot instill changes within thee.
    Nor, the sun, moon, stars, earth and sky
    -only me.


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    am i the only one who entered tis topic...? cos tis is a good one to be left ignored. it entered words in my head like changes, scenes and whatever's written there...i could figure the image perfectly...

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    i have to say...i have to get back here to read this once more...just beautiful... smile

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    Why thank you tsilo smile I'm glad you like this poem...or rather sonnet.
    I find writing within rules is hard to accomplish..but this particular piece came out very nice...

    I love to sit somewhere and watch people go by and wonder what they are thinking or off to. In this way I felt this peom was a part of me. Thank you again

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